Volvo Pliers

"Slant6" (slant-6) 06/19/2016 at 00:27 • Filed to: None

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Any feedback or favorite photos? Here’s what my final page layout looks like now, also taking feedback on it. I already have some things in mind to change.

Also that big pliers was just a placeholder until I had the final model completed. This will probably also do a morning repost since I apparently have no concept of time and am only getting to working on this now.

Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch > Slant6 06/19/2016 at 00:42

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I like these. As for your layout, less is more, and align right is your friend. Good on using complementary colors, however I personally dislike de-saturated colors.

Slant6 > Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch 06/19/2016 at 00:53

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This is an earlier version, feedback from my professor is that I should include more of my sketches and sketch models. Maybe I can make them less opaque like this version.

Thanks!

Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch > Slant6 06/19/2016 at 01:11

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I thing the photos of the cars might be a little jarring interspersed with sketches too. I do like the pliers though, and this stuff takes a while to get the hang of.

Slant6 > Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch 06/19/2016 at 01:17

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I’m thinking about maybe un-croping the cars and having them with the photos. It might work, maybe a stack of photos on the side.

Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch > Slant6 06/19/2016 at 01:21

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Could you find development sketches of the cars and have them co-develop with your design? Just throwing out ideas.

Slant6 > Bman76 (no it doesn't need a WS6 hood) M. Arch 06/19/2016 at 01:39

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That’s a good idea. I did base the design more on the interior materials though. Which means I should probably include pictures of the interior.